01 / un:parfaitgirl

[parfaitgirl]

[ A post appears on the network -- it's just a picture, of some writing in a notebook. Nothing else. Perhaps the handwriting or the style might remind you of another poem you read some time ago ... ]

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un: eudaimonikos

[eudaimonikos]

[Well, Michael's instincts are telling him that this poem business is absolutely embarrassing and that he should 100% join in on bullying the poet...but he can feel the echo of Alex's indignation in the back of his mind. He may not care much about anyone, but he doesn't want to upset Alex. He has a feeling that that would........feel bad.]

So what's your actual problem? Don't like that someone else was confident in their work?

[motherfucking_ghost]

nobody likes a critic even in animal rpg land i guess

[motherfucking_ghost]

bruh first thing ive ever seen on this thing of corse im gonna see wtf it is
didnt exactly come w any like description or warning or anything just heres this thing

[motherfucking_ghost]

well first it was that its a shit poem i didnt ask 4 but now its that every1 else things its the gr8test thing 2 ever be written
starting to think im gettin pranked actually

[eudaimonikos]

[Michael doesn't care about the poem one way or another, really, but he's here now! He's digging in!]

Write us a better poem, then.

[snyaiper]

if we're just getting rid of things that "suck" and aren't useful or good maybe we should get rid of an idiot like you next, hm?

[motherfucking_ghost]

lol im not the one claiming 2 b a writer unlike some ppl idk why everyone assumes u cant have a negative opinion wo bein good at the thing urself
or a lot more ppl would be ace at being football refs im tellin u
my name is church
and wen it nite
or wen someone
post up sum shite
and the replys
are all conjunctiv
i brek the mold
my crit constructiv

[motherfucking_ghost]

ooooooooo noooooo dont send me away from weirdo fantasy magical animal land that would be awwwwwfuuuuuul

[eudaimonikos]

Wow, I can't believe you'd post such a shitty poem on the network! What a weird nerd.

[menarefrom]

oh wow. you got me

[hxppythxughts]

if u give critique it should be so that someone can do something better next time!
if ur just being mean about it then theyre not gonna want to do it again and thats not very helpful

un: PAPYRUS

[spaghettimonster]

MAYBE YOU DIDN'T...
OR MAYBE WE ALL SIGNED UP FOR POEM CLUB, AND FORGOT! OH NO!
THANK GOODNESS PARFAITGIRL IS HERE TO SAVE IT.

un: PAPYRUS

[spaghettimonster]

ARE WE ALL WRITING POEMS?
OR GIVING OUR OPINIONS ON THEM???
I THINK, I HOPE YOU FIND A NEW FAVORITE MUG.
EVEN IF YOUR OLD FAVORITE IS BROKEN, AND EATEN,
I'M SURE IT WOULD WANT TO KNOW, YOU CAN HAVE MORE WARM DRINKS.

[parfaitgirl]

why should i tell you? you're being a huge jerk for no reason

[parfaitgirl]

oh
well thanks i guess
glad you liked it

[parfaitgirl]

thanks sayori
i feel like i havent finished writing anything in forever

i think that one was more of a juice cup acting like a mug if you ask me

[parfaitgirl]

[ Oh wow. That's ... really sweet. ]

thanks
right now i still feel kind of sad about it but maybe someday

i posted it cause i was kind of hoping other people would want to start writing poems too
and maybe it can help people remember some stuff they forgot idk

[parfaitgirl]

☚(*´∀｀☚) LOLOLOL

[spaghettimonster]

WELL, IT'S A LITTLE WARM OUT, FOR WARM DRINKS.
YOU HAVE TIME.

[Maybe when it starts raining would be the perfect time of day.]

I DON'T REMEMBER WRITING POEMS...
BUT WHAT I REMEMBER, I REMEMBERED WHEN DOING SOMETHING SIMILAR.
IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU'RE ON TO SOMETHING.
YEAH! LET'S WRITE SOME POETRY!

[parfaitgirl]

wont it be warm out forever? we're on a tropical island lol (*´∀｀)

cool, you should post it when you're done! and maybe what you write about might help remind people of their own memories too

[motherfucking_ghost]

i no rite fuckin lamesauce like take some classes mayb or sumth

[menarefrom]

It reminds me of something. I think that's the point of poetry, to make you feel and think and remember.

[parfaitgirl]

well that was kind of the point yeah
i think i have all my memories back but a lot of people still seem to be missing stuff
so i thought maybe this might help people remember
maybe they had their own favorite mug

[menarefrom]

Then I suppose I should say thank you for helping me remember mine.

[There's still pieces missing. But he doesn't remember those pieces to know they're gone!]

[eudaimonikos]

Right?
parfaitgirl Sounds like you're the local poetry expert. Wanna teach a class?