01 / un:parfaitgirl

[parfaitgirl]

[ A post appears on the network -- it's just a picture, of some writing in a notebook. Nothing else. Perhaps the handwriting or the style might remind you of another poem you read some time ago ... ]

Comments

text | un: synagogue

[motherfucking_ghost]

wtf is this
it doesnt even ryme all the way
how can the mug be perf if the handles too small n its awkward n its ugly
also if u broke it then shuldnt it be had a fav mug or does that destroy the dramatic tension

text | un: yamaneko

[snyaiper]

maybe you should keep your opinions to yourself
maybe you don't know what you're talking about
also, learn how to spell, moron.

[Ogata didn't even write the poem why is he so defensive??]

[motherfucking_ghost]

ill use spellcheck when this person learns 2 poem
or like learns to keep poetry to themself
and it doesnt ryme all the way thru the last one doesnt have one in it at all not even internal rythm

[snyaiper]

poems don't have to rhyme
you'd know that if you knew anything about poetry

[Do you, Ogata??]

[parfaitgirl]

how are you gonna tell me what a good poem is supposed to have when you can't even spell lol
also, it's a metaphor, stupid

[motherfucking_ghost]

nobodys ever heard of texting around here cool im not writing academic papers
oooo is it a metaphor for life
n how it sux
mega deep

un: jdenvH8r82

[rockymountaindie]

Hey dude
I agree with yamaneko, you're being really mean here
Sure I'm not great at poetry but if someone took the time to write this and put it on here you could do better than just be an internet troll

[parfaitgirl]

why should i tell you? you're being a huge jerk for no reason

un: swordfish

[menarefrom]

with all you poets around here I'll never have to buy a book again.

[parfaitgirl]

are you making fun of me or is that a compliment

[menarefrom]

I can see why that might need to be clarified.

Compliment, I promise.

un: dearsunshine; text

[hxppythxughts]

OMGGG this is beautiful!!! i love it!!! (●♡∀♡))ヾ☆*。u did such a good job i cant stop reading it!!!

and i think i get it!
i feel like
i used to have a mug like that too u know?

[parfaitgirl]

thanks sayori
i feel like i havent finished writing anything in forever

i think that one was more of a juice cup acting like a mug if you ask me

[hxppythxughts]

its got me all excited to write more too!!! ill have to finish some of mine and post them!!! o(≧∇≦o)

wwwwww i still dont remember super well but if u say so i trust u hehehe ☆⌒(≧▽​° )
its just a feeling i got when i read this...like i felt the feeling too!

un: PAPYRUS

[spaghettimonster]

ARE WE ALL WRITING POEMS?
OR GIVING OUR OPINIONS ON THEM???
I THINK, I HOPE YOU FIND A NEW FAVORITE MUG.
EVEN IF YOUR OLD FAVORITE IS BROKEN, AND EATEN,
I'M SURE IT WOULD WANT TO KNOW, YOU CAN HAVE MORE WARM DRINKS.

[parfaitgirl]

[ Oh wow. That's ... really sweet. ]

thanks
right now i still feel kind of sad about it but maybe someday

i posted it cause i was kind of hoping other people would want to start writing poems too
and maybe it can help people remember some stuff they forgot idk

[spaghettimonster]

WELL, IT'S A LITTLE WARM OUT, FOR WARM DRINKS.
YOU HAVE TIME.

[Maybe when it starts raining would be the perfect time of day.]

I DON'T REMEMBER WRITING POEMS...
BUT WHAT I REMEMBER, I REMEMBERED WHEN DOING SOMETHING SIMILAR.
IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU'RE ON TO SOMETHING.
YEAH! LET'S WRITE SOME POETRY!

un: mrbellucci

[protegge]

whoa

man this made me smile a lot and then i got really sad

[thank you mista. this is all natsuki gets at the moment it seems]

[parfaitgirl]

yeah thats kinda how i felt too

[protegge]

when you wrote it you mean?

i guess that means its a good poem huh
since it made me feel what you were feeling
sorry ur sad tho

un: justrose

[spacerock]

It seems like a lot of people already want to help you put it back together, or look for a new one with you.

[parfaitgirl]

sure seems like it
it cant really be put back together tho
but i guess finding a new one could happen, maybe

un: sidewalkends

[myliteratureclub]

This is really good poem Natsuki.
You're definitely improving!
Your style is definitely your own too.

[ ... ]

I'm... sorry though.
I hope writing out your feelings at least helped a little.

[parfaitgirl]

thanks monika
its been awhile since i finished anything

it did help a little bit
hopefully itll help other people too

[myliteratureclub]

You did great!
I'm kind of jealous.
I haven't had any writing inspiration in awhile...

I'm really glad it did.
Maybe I should try something too.