01 / un:parfaitgirl

[parfaitgirl]

[ A post appears on the network -- it's just a picture, of some writing in a notebook. Nothing else. Perhaps the handwriting or the style might remind you of another poem you read some time ago ... ]

Comments

text | un: yamaneko

[snyaiper]

maybe you should keep your opinions to yourself
maybe you don't know what you're talking about
also, learn how to spell, moron.

[Ogata didn't even write the poem why is he so defensive??]

[motherfucking_ghost]

ill use spellcheck when this person learns 2 poem
or like learns to keep poetry to themself
and it doesnt ryme all the way thru the last one doesnt have one in it at all not even internal rythm

[snyaiper]

poems don't have to rhyme
you'd know that if you knew anything about poetry

[Do you, Ogata??]

[motherfucking_ghost]

it starts with a rhym scheme [really church you're gonna do this you're gonna be too lazy to spell rhyme when it's right in front of you but you'll hit scheme out of the park i fucking hate you] but then ends it in the last verse
n maybe its indictiv of a bigger message abt the idk futility of giving a shit abt an ugly mug but in that cast it feels
lame

[and then a few moments later] shit are there kids here
this is a kiddy poem isnt it
some kid shared kiddos first poem wanting praise from the cool adults right
almost feel bad abt it now

[snyaiper]

[Church really went on a fucking journey there, huh.]

What do you mean "are there kids here"? We've been here for weeks now. Are you really so unobservant that you don't know?
I'd like to see you do better if you think you can do better than this
you're so caught up on the rhyming you completely missed the point of the poem

[motherfucking_ghost]

i mean r there kids here dude like yeah theres animal people kids but are there rpg quest kids here
lolllll who said i wrote poetry cuz i didnt
ok shakespear whats the point or did i hurt ur feefees

[snyaiper]

There's a whole mess of teenagers. And besides that, did you forget about our erstwhile boy detective so quickly?

[Yeah Church how could you forget about ANGUS?]

Obviously it's about how some things that seem terrible could actually become useful and cared for. But they never last.

[motherfucking_ghost]

who
[give him a moment]
memory relic artifact detective guy oh is he a teen kid or something too how tf am i supposed to no that
fugly mug being useful cuz its the only last minute clean mug left doesnt speak highly of it n there are always more mugs tho like
get a new one
n if it seemed terrible at first then why give a fuck if its gone tho
like get rid of it if it sux so bad in the first place

[snyaiper]

if we're just getting rid of things that "suck" and aren't useful or good maybe we should get rid of an idiot like you next, hm?

[motherfucking_ghost]

ooooooooo noooooo dont send me away from weirdo fantasy magical animal land that would be awwwwwfuuuuuul

[snyaiper]

you seem to misunderstand what I meant by "get rid of" because I was imagining a more permanent solution.

[parfaitgirl]

hey he sucks but maybe don't actually kill him though

[snyaiper]

I'm not going to, I'm just trying to point out the flaw in his argument.

[But y'know, while he has her here;]

this isn't Sayori, is it? I can't tell over the network.

[parfaitgirl]

no but i WILL tell on you to her if you're bad

[snyaiper]

[Ogata, who's still yet to remember much of anything: ????]

Just because I apparently knew her before doesn't mean she has any say over what I say or do

[menarefrom]

Plenty of highly recognized poets break rhyme scheme.
Then there's translated poems, too.

[motherfucking_ghost]

sure but theyve got nothing on bofa

[menarefrom]

bofa?????

[motherfucking_ghost]

bofa deez nutz

[menarefrom]

oh wow. you got me

un: dearsunshine; text

[hxppythxughts]

why are u being so mean?

[motherfucking_ghost]

youve yet 2 see me b mean
annoying aparently
frustrating mayb

[hxppythxughts]

it seems mean to me to make fun of sth that someone worked hard on and put their feelings into

[motherfucking_ghost]

nobody likes a critic even in animal rpg land i guess

[hxppythxughts]

if u give critique it should be so that someone can do something better next time!
if ur just being mean about it then theyre not gonna want to do it again and thats not very helpful